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Please, tell me about all my mistakes
Well, I registered here for getting help with my English vocabulary and grammar.
I really need it.
I don't want to live in Russia, because our government doesn't care about people.
I'm only 13 now, but I have my own opinion about this.
In the future I want to move to USA, Britain or to other European country.
And if I really want it I must learn English.
I hope this site and you will help me to make my dream come true :) Thank you

NastyaArmstrongMay 2013100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Well, I registered here for getting help with my English vocabulary and grammar.
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- I really need it.
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- I don't want to live in Russia, because our government doesn't care about people.
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- I'm only 13 now, but I have my own opinion about this.
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- In the future I want to move to USA, Britain or to other European country.
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- And if I really want it I must learn English.
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- I hope this site and you will help me to make my dream come true :) Thank you
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