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Hi, I would like to improve my English because I plan to continue my studies in Marketing in London.
I'd like to have a penfriend with someone whose mother tongue is English or whoever knows English very well.
I can teach a very good Italian if you are interestd in.
Thank you very much

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- Hi, I would like to improve my English because I plan to continue my studies in Marketing in London.
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- I'd like to have a penfriend with someone whose mother tongue is English or whoever knows English very well.
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- I can teach a very good Italian if you are interestd in.
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- Thank you very much
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