Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from fredys92 - English

  • its a beginning

  • ok.. this is just a oportunity for tell you about me..
  • and for an evaluation too.. i am fredy. i have 20 years old. and in a few days i will be on birthday. so i will received all the gifts of you.
  • :D i am lover of the music.. i love play the electric guitar and my dream is to play as guthrie govan. he is my prefer guitarrist, he is very good.. i vill have to study hard to be as him. ok.. and i have so many dreams but i dont want that you bore with my things.. only share a little of me.. all corrections and tips are welcome.. good day for everybody.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • and for an evaluation too.. i am fredy. i have 20 years old. and in a few days i will be on birthday. so i will received all the gifts of you.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • :D i am lover of the music.. i love play the electric guitar and my dream is to play as guthrie govan. he is my prefer guitarrist, he is very good.. i vill have to study hard to be as him. ok.. and i have so many dreams but i dont want that you bore with my things.. only share a little of me.. all corrections and tips are welcome.. good day for everybody.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3