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My dad has an interesting hobby.
My dad has an interesting hobby.
He embroiders the cross.
First, he embroidered at purchase schemes.
But then began to make the circuit of a photo using a special computer program.
He has embroidered portraits of all of us and not only.

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- My dad has an interesting hobby.
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句子 1
- My dad has an interesting hobby.
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句子 2
- He embroiders the cross.
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- First, he embroidered at purchase schemes.
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- But then began to make the circuit of a photo using a special computer program.
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- He has embroidered portraits of all of us and not only.
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