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My trip
Hello.
Last week I travel to France with my family.
I visit my grandmother in Lyon.
It was great,my grandmother gave to me some old photos of my mom.
She was so cute and funny.
My brother and I was laughting all day...
i wanted to visit Paris but my parent didn't have enough time.
I was sad becouse of that but they take me in some big funfair.
On return to home, they bought me t-shirt whith pic of France on left side like a memory on my trip.

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- My trip
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- Hello.
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- Last week I travel to France with my family.
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- I visit my grandmother in Lyon.
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- It was great,my grandmother gave to me some old photos of my mom.
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- She was so cute and funny.
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- My brother and I was laughting all day...
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- i wanted to visit Paris but my parent didn't have enough time.
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- I was sad becouse of that but they take me in some big funfair.
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- On return to home, they bought me t-shirt whith pic of France on left side like a memory on my trip.
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