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importance of goals
Two days ago I've seen the video on youtube.
There was a speech by Jim Rohn, video recorded maybe ten or less years ago, but it stills deserving attention.
My favourite part is about setting the goals.
Mr. Rohn spoke the simple language: "If purpose is clear, price is easy to pay".
These words came into my mind, and I repeat it intenionaly.
I very like this idea.
You need to have the purpose, as it does your life meaningful.
And also the clarity of the aims is a key thing to achieve much more of them.
After viewing that video, I'm going to know more about Mr. Rohn and his ideas, of couse to read the books he authored as well.

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- importance of goals
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- Two days ago I've seen the video on youtube.
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句子 2
- There was a speech by Jim Rohn, video recorded maybe ten or less years ago, but it stills deserving attention.
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句子 3
- My favourite part is about setting the goals.
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句子 4
- Mr. Rohn spoke the simple language: "If purpose is clear, price is easy to pay".
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- These words came into my mind, and I repeat it intenionaly.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- I very like this idea.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- You need to have the purpose, as it does your life meaningful.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- And also the clarity of the aims is a key thing to achieve much more of them.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- After viewing that video, I'm going to know more about Mr. Rohn and his ideas, of couse to read the books he authored as well.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9