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PLEASE HELP ME GUYS , THANKS.
I love the domestic animals, I love dogs, but in specially way I love cats, I find them lovely.
I have a cat, she's name is Safira, I found her in my old factory when she was pupped.
I remember that was this small cat alone, she was following me through the shads while I walked.
I thought she got hungry so I took her and I got her with me into a factory.
When I finished my work, I got her with me at my home.
Anyway, has been 4 years ago, now she grove up.
Right now she's sleeping next to me, "after that she ate ,naturally".
She became the Queen into my Home.

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- PLEASE HELP ME GUYS , THANKS.
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句子 1
- I love the domestic animals, I love dogs, but in specially way I love cats, I find them lovely.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I have a cat, she's name is Safira, I found her in my old factory when she was pupped.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I remember that was this small cat alone, she was following me through the shads while I walked.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I thought she got hungry so I took her and I got her with me into a factory.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- When I finished my work, I got her with me at my home.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Anyway, has been 4 years ago, now she grove up.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Right now she's sleeping next to me, "after that she ate ,naturally".
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- She became the Queen into my Home.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8