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  • starting an apprenticeship-changes and challenges

  • Today I am going to talk about changes and challenges if you starting an apprenticeship.
  • There is an idom "Learning years are not earning years" which mean that you start small, you are new in the buisness and you are unsteady.
  • You are increases slowly and you learning more and more and eventually you will make it big.
  • Maybe you are not the only apprenticeship, so you are together competitors.
  • You as a apprentice will make all right and you will reach your finish.
  • But the question is how I get on with my colleagues, will I get a bad or good review and the most important question is, will the trainer take me in his own buisness.
  • In this age the teenager will choose her own resolution and the parents must accept them.
  • In the vacational school you will learn a lot about the job and if the vacational school is far away from you maybe in a other city, you must stay in a apartment for only apprentice.
  • Then you must go on with your room neighbours who complete the same apprenticeship and you must go on with the new city.
  • You can' t see every day your family and you must provide for yourself alone.
  • But the biggest challenge is, that you grow about yourself.
  • I mean herewith that you are not more a teenager who goes to school but a adult who starting an apprenticeship and that is a big step in the adult-world.
  • But the apprenticeship brig a lot of challenges in your life too.
  • For example from now on you earn your own money and you must to learn to get on with the money.
  • But in the apprenticeship you will more physical and psychical loaded.
  • Compared with the school you mustn' t sit 4 or 6 hours but 8 or more and work hard, you will have more less time for free.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
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    • There is an idom "Learning years are not earning years" which mean that you start small, you are new in the buisness and you are unsteady.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • But the question is how I get on with my colleagues, will I get a bad or good review and the most important question is, will the trainer take me in his own buisness.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • In the vacational school you will learn a lot about the job and if the vacational school is far away from you maybe in a other city, you must stay in a apartment for only apprentice.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • Then you must go on with your room neighbours who complete the same apprenticeship and you must go on with the new city.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • I mean herewith that you are not more a teenager who goes to school but a adult who starting an apprenticeship and that is a big step in the adult-world.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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    • Compared with the school you mustn' t sit 4 or 6 hours but 8 or more and work hard, you will have more less time for free.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16