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Experience
Hi, everyone.
Nice to meet you.
I have a experience from a place.
I will tell to you.
One day, i went to a beautiful place named Kaliurang with family.
From my house to Kaliurang need about 2 hours.
In Kaliurang, dad and i started a journey.

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- Nice to meet you.
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- One day, i went to a beautiful place named Kaliurang with family.
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- In Kaliurang, dad and i started a journey.
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