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My Saturday
yesterday, i was playing when my phone rang, that was my friend, he asked me if i will come at his house next saturday.
So i am answering him i would like to but my brother is going to come back and every sunday i watch my favorite serie. so i can't go to his house.

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- yesterday, i was playing when my phone rang, that was my friend, he asked me if i will come at his house next saturday.
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- So i am answering him i would like to but my brother is going to come back and every sunday i watch my favorite serie. so i can't go to his house.
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