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Text from EldyaTirza - English

  • dayoff

  • If i have a free time or day off,i usually spare my time with reading book, swimming, watching the movies, playing guitar,relaxing in the mall,culinary,and learning something new.
  • I love the nice place, one of the city that i love is bandung.
  • Bandung is the city that so close from jakarta, the distance only 2 hours or 125km.
  • Is there anybody come to this city?
  • So nice isn't it?
  • So many factory outlet, romantic culinary there, so recommended, damn i love it.
  • Thanks for the opportunity that you gave to me.
  • I have 4 siblings & i am the only daughter.
  • I'm so thankful to my God because i have a good.
  • Family, i have the best mom (yuph, you are the best mommy i ever had).
  • Have 3 brothers that i love.

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