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Family
I have a Little family.
My mother Ludmila work in supermarket "Crown" and my father Vladimir retired on a pension 20 years ago because he is a major.
Also i have elder sister she is a very good hairdresser.

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- I have a Little family.
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- My mother Ludmila work in supermarket "Crown" and my father Vladimir retired on a pension 20 years ago because he is a major.
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- Also i have elder sister she is a very good hairdresser.
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