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  • He hears the girlfriend’s voice and he wake up from the unconsc

  • Hearing Anda’s voice has partially woken up Matthew Taylor from the unconsciousness.
  • “He watered when we have approached the phone to the ear, and when she has asked him a question, even he has whispered “yes”.
  • So Matthew’s godfather has told to Telegraph the miraculous moment when the boy has suddenly shown consciousness signs after ten months of unconsciousness.
  • The English man, 31, taught in Indonesia for 18 months when an accident with the motorcycle has ruined his dreams for the future.
  • After a complicated surgical intervention in the Isle, the boy came into unconsciousness and for ten long months his conditions are remained stable.
  • The crash has seriously damaged the skull and it seemed there was not hope for the Matthew’s awakening.
  • At the moment of the crash, the boy had not an health assurance, and in Great Britain this means paying £ 100,000 for his medical outlay.
  • So Matthew’s father has gave his life savings, while the godfather has started a second mortgage for his house.
  • There was the change when the medicals thought of trying a new option.
  • It’s about a program divided in different phases, and in someone are stimulated the patient’s sense of hearing, smell and touch, followed by periods of complete rest.
  • As a part of the program, three weeks ago Matthew’s mother has decided to call Anda, constrained by working reasons to stay far away from his boyfriend.
  • During a call phone, the boy has started watering, which in a few seconds had the face wet.
  • From here, a slow but impressive improvements of his conditions.

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    • “He watered when we have approached the phone to the ear, and when she has asked him a question, even he has whispered “yes”.
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    • So Matthew’s godfather has told to Telegraph the miraculous moment when the boy has suddenly shown consciousness signs after ten months of unconsciousness.
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    • The English man, 31, taught in Indonesia for 18 months when an accident with the motorcycle has ruined his dreams for the future.
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    • After a complicated surgical intervention in the Isle, the boy came into unconsciousness and for ten long months his conditions are remained stable.
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    • At the moment of the crash, the boy had not an health assurance, and in Great Britain this means paying £ 100,000 for his medical outlay.
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    • It’s about a program divided in different phases, and in someone are stimulated the patient’s sense of hearing, smell and touch, followed by periods of complete rest.
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    • As a part of the program, three weeks ago Matthew’s mother has decided to call Anda, constrained by working reasons to stay far away from his boyfriend.
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