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Hello I practise a extreme sport .
It's the skydiving, I love this sport because I love strong sensation.
For practise this sport you'll wear a combination and a helmet .
Then you go in the sky with a aeroplane and you jump in the air with a professor who know made skydiving .
For finish, skydiving is a best extreme sport of the world, I love that .

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- Hello I practise a extreme sport .
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- It's the skydiving, I love this sport because I love strong sensation.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- For practise this sport you'll wear a combination and a helmet .
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- Then you go in the sky with a aeroplane and you jump in the air with a professor who know made skydiving .
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- For finish, skydiving is a best extreme sport of the world, I love that .
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