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Hello there
Hello guys, I'm trying to find a work experience, in a broadcasting audiovisual company.
I would like to practice video editing into a professionnal environment, to improve my skills.
I love cinema, but this time I think I'll try to find a TV job, or a corporate one.
So I could gain some experience, in order to be able to have a very good work experience next year.

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- Hello guys, I'm trying to find a work experience, in a broadcasting audiovisual company.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- I would like to practice video editing into a professionnal environment, to improve my skills.
  투표하세요!
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- I love cinema, but this time I think I'll try to find a TV job, or a corporate one.
  투표하세요!
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- So I could gain some experience, in order to be able to have a very good work experience next year.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4