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My old cat-shampion!
My cat of 18 years.
It is very beautiful and kind.
This year, he participated in the exhibition and took four first places.
Because cats do not live as long.
He was the only one in his age group))) He was fighting against himself.

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- My old cat-shampion!
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- My cat of 18 years.
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- It is very beautiful and kind.
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- This year, he participated in the exhibition and took four first places.
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- Because cats do not live as long.
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- He was the only one in his age group))) He was fighting against himself.
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