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I was the first of both bothers whose their parents weren Bakers whe I am 15 years old I always to the pool with my Grandpa and he always talks to me about the old years whe he was a young man in the 50th about how he meat my grandmother he told me the first thought than came to he's mine was about georgous woman coming towards him to asked about the time in the aveniu Savoy