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從segopapillon來的文本 - English

  • a good animation

  • I have been seen a good animation.
  • The story speak about a love and a game in virtual world.
  • The graphism are very beautiful and colors are good and drawings are very well representing.
  • I like this animation because there are a moral and a happy end.

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