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  • I love my grandma

  • My grandma left me for another place in October 27 last year,I think about her everyday.She love me more than any people,so I am.I think no one can feel my world,I always cry for missing her so much.If god can make my dream come true,My dream must be let my dear grandma alive.

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    • My grandma left me for another place in October 27 last year,I think about her everyday.She love me more than any people,so I am.I think no one can feel my world,I always cry for missing her so much.If god can make my dream come true,My dream must be let my dear grandma alive.
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