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  • Hi!My name is Galina.I am 29 years old.I would like to tell one short story about my baby.She is 3.Her name is Elithabet and she is very cunning and naughty.So in the morning I and Liza had gathered strawberry.I gave a plate my dauther that she would pick up it herself.I started to pick up strawberry and put into my plate than i turned and saw the nex picture:Liza had taking my strawberry from my plate and putting it into her plate.She had saying" You can gather yourself more":).
  • Liza is impish and it is not easy whith her sometimes but i love her very much.My husbund is in a business trip now.In august he will coming back and we will go to Azov sea whith the whole family.
  • I think it will be great!

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    • Hi!My name is Galina.I am 29 years old.I would like to tell one short story about my baby.She is 3.Her name is Elithabet and she is very cunning and naughty.So in the morning I and Liza had gathered strawberry.I gave a plate my dauther that she would pick up it herself.I started to pick up strawberry and put into my plate than i turned and saw the nex picture:Liza had taking my strawberry from my plate and putting it into her plate.She had saying" You can gather yourself more":).
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    • Liza is impish and it is not easy whith her sometimes but i love her very much.My husbund is in a business trip now.In august he will coming back and we will go to Azov sea whith the whole family.
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