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When I see the bottom of the hole I thougt it was very deeper I enduered too much from my fellows I wanna reach my goals before the year ends Rather I need to find a job maybe I can go to the Casino and try to win in the gemble games I felt very sorrow when the noat goes on the sea and nevermore was saw it for anyone I was very up sed the that situatio So I take the bin cleaning my room and take the rubbish out .