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make friends and learning english
I really wanna learn English.
English is a international language, and I'm studying at Banking Academy, I will graduate at next month, I study Financial faculty. so, I want to work for Bank or financial company.
well, alot of bank, or company require employee good english, so all student need to good english.
I'd love to learn English, especially, I want to work for foreign company, because it influent me to dedicate for company, maximum effective work is very important.
Besides, I would like to know culture about foreign countries, and informations of the world.
Travelling to manny countries is big dream of mind.
so, I'd love to make friends from another countries, who can help me to practice and make me good in English. it is happy to help somone Vietnamese. thanks!

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Oración 1
- I really wanna learn English.
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Oración 2
- English is a international language, and I'm studying at Banking Academy, I will graduate at next month, I study Financial faculty. so, I want to work for Bank or financial company.
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Oración 3
- well, alot of bank, or company require employee good english, so all student need to good english.
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Oración 4
- I'd love to learn English, especially, I want to work for foreign company, because it influent me to dedicate for company, maximum effective work is very important.
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Oración 5
- Besides, I would like to know culture about foreign countries, and informations of the world.
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Oración 6
- Travelling to manny countries is big dream of mind.
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Oración 7
- so, I'd love to make friends from another countries, who can help me to practice and make me good in English. it is happy to help somone Vietnamese. thanks!
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- ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 7