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I'm a new entry!
Hi, my brother has told me of this site and so, I have registred myself.
Maybe I should change my level and to select "beginner" but I'd be successful!!!
:) At soon, by.

cancerina75June 2013赶紧投票吧！
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标题
- I'm a new entry!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi, my brother has told me of this site and so, I have registred myself.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Maybe I should change my level and to select "beginner" but I'd be successful!!!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- :) At soon, by.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3