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  • About me

  • Hi to everybody , my name's Roberto ,i'm 19 and i live in italy.I love everything of England and next year i 'll come in England to try to learn fluent english for a few month with the erasmus .
  • In the future after finished my studies in economy i'd like to move in your country and search for a job in the finance or in some company in the sector of marketing .

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    • Hi to everybody , my name's Roberto ,i'm 19 and i live in italy.I love everything of England and next year i 'll come in England to try to learn fluent english for a few month with the erasmus .
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    • In the future after finished my studies in economy i'd like to move in your country and search for a job in the finance or in some company in the sector of marketing .
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