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please give me feedback in my pronunciation
How to be less shy.
https://soundcloud.com/dramirezag/how-to-be-less-shy This is a recording of myself speaking spontaneous. without reading anything Please give me feedback. Thank you.

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- please give me feedback in my pronunciation
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句子 1
- How to be less shy.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- https://soundcloud.com/dramirezag/how-to-be-less-shy This is a recording of myself speaking spontaneous. without reading anything Please give me feedback. Thank you.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2