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End worlds..
Today is December 13th, thursday, at morning, I woke up cuz I thought that yesterday December 12th the world end, smile.
Yesterday night I talk with Xiomy all night until dawn, because I feel very tired.
Today, I woke up while thought: "Xiomy, today I will give a present" then, now, I make the bubbles (a powerpuff girl) on polystyrene.
Bubbles are the favorite for Xiomy.
While I made these, Xiomy arrived to my home with violet eyes.
I felt surprised, and I said her: show me your eyes, and she looked to my eyes and I saw her eyes.
Later, almost six o'clock, we going to get together with Vivi and Karolette to made a slumber party.

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- End worlds..
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句子 1
- Today is December 13th, thursday, at morning, I woke up cuz I thought that yesterday December 12th the world end, smile.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Yesterday night I talk with Xiomy all night until dawn, because I feel very tired.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Today, I woke up while thought: "Xiomy, today I will give a present" then, now, I make the bubbles (a powerpuff girl) on polystyrene.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Bubbles are the favorite for Xiomy.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- While I made these, Xiomy arrived to my home with violet eyes.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- I felt surprised, and I said her: show me your eyes, and she looked to my eyes and I saw her eyes.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- Later, almost six o'clock, we going to get together with Vivi and Karolette to made a slumber party.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7