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dramirezag (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

What's your motivation for learning English?
this is a recording of myself speaking spontaneous answering the question above.
It is very short about 1 minute Please give me some feedback.
thanks in advance.
https://soundcloud.com/dramirezag/3-1

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- What's your motivation for learning English?
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- this is a recording of myself speaking spontaneous answering the question above.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- It is very short about 1 minute Please give me some feedback.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- thanks in advance.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- https://soundcloud.com/dramirezag/3-1
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4