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Text from BrenoRios - English

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Hi Everybody
Hiiii everybody. How are you? I'm great now.
My name is Breno I'm a braziliam guy and I'm here to learn about more English and Spanish.
I would like to visit other country some day where I can improve my English and to learn about other culture.
If you want to learn Portugue I can teach you. ohhh I forgot I'm 23 years old haha.
So, I think it is only this.

BrenoRiosDecember 2012Balsuok dabar!
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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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- Hi Everybody
  Balsuok dabar!
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Sentence 1
- Hiiii everybody. How are you? I'm great now.
  Balsuok dabar!
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Sentence 2
- My name is Breno I'm a braziliam guy and I'm here to learn about more English and Spanish.
  Balsuok dabar!
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Sentence 3
- I would like to visit other country some day where I can improve my English and to learn about other culture.
  Balsuok dabar!
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Sentence 4
- If you want to learn Portugue I can teach you. ohhh I forgot I'm 23 years old haha.
  Balsuok dabar!
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Sentence 5
- So, I think it is only this.
  Balsuok dabar!
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