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  • Go on a picnic

  • When i was studing in primary school, i took part ina trip which located in a village.
  • Attending this trip included whole school students and teachers.
  • This journey was quite special which we would walked to the village.
  • If you would like to join in this trip, you will bring food, drink and other snack. when we been to the village, our teacher claimed the rule of games.
  • To begin with, we cook the food with shared my classmate. and then our judgement will made a decision. which student have good cook, you will got some presents.
  • For example, candy, biscuits and comic book. you can learn independent and team work from this trip.
  • so, i was so enjoyabe at that moment.
  • I no longer to forgot that wonderful trip.

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