Pataisymai

SKUBAUS TAISYMO PAGALBA!Netaisyta

Text from vgrowlee - English

  • "I am fallen down for 300m and I am unharmed"

  • Simply he has made the wrong choice, but it is like all the angels’ paradise would have decided to help him without a reason.
  • He has placed his foot in a wrong way and he has fallen for three hundred metres, a height like twice and a half of the London Eye and like the Eiffel Tower, even if we consider the antenna.
  • He has bumped against lots of stone corners, he has reversed himself like a ship overwhelmed by waves and he has left blood spots on ice.
  • When he is stopped, he had not more breath, only the mouth full of ground.
  • He has scream: “I’m alive.” Then he has got up and he has cleaned his knees, like they would have done no more than a trip during a children game.
  • It has become just a miracle instead.
  • Seated on a leather armchair in a Glasgow Hospital, Adam Potter, 36 years old, has like a boxer’s face after fifteen rounds finished in a badly way.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • Simply he has made the wrong choice, but it is like all the angels’ paradise would have decided to help him without a reason.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • He has placed his foot in a wrong way and he has fallen for three hundred metres, a height like twice and a half of the London Eye and like the Eiffel Tower, even if we consider the antenna.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • He has bumped against lots of stone corners, he has reversed himself like a ship overwhelmed by waves and he has left blood spots on ice.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • He has scream: “I’m alive.” Then he has got up and he has cleaned his knees, like they would have done no more than a trip during a children game.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • Seated on a leather armchair in a Glasgow Hospital, Adam Potter, 36 years old, has like a boxer’s face after fifteen rounds finished in a badly way.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7