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  • Good weather

  • It has been sunny for a week in my hometown which is one of the three hottest cities in China.We feel like doing sauna each second in bus,on the road or even in the house.Our hometown is famous for the delicious food -hotspot which is like the hash weather.Finally,we have look forward to today's good weather.It's raining in summer,and the temperature drops to 30c from 42c.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English

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    • It has been sunny for a week in my hometown which is one of the three hottest cities in China.We feel like doing sauna each second in bus,on the road or even in the house.Our hometown is famous for the delicious food -hotspot which is like the hash weather.Finally,we have look forward to today's good weather.It's raining in summer,and the temperature drops to 30c from 42c.
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