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My travel
Today, it´s my last day in Turkey.
My travel has been very excelent and the next year, I will return in this country very beautiful.

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- My travel
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句子 1
- Today, it´s my last day in Turkey.
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句子 2
- My travel has been very excelent and the next year, I will return in this country very beautiful.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2