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Today.
Today, I did the shop on Paris after to have landing in Roissy.
I like very to take plane because that remember me the sensation to fly on the earth.
The weather in France today is cloudy, rainy and very cold.
I didn't like it.
If somebody would like help me to improve my English, I have skype : rosejug. Thank you.

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- Today.
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- Today, I did the shop on Paris after to have landing in Roissy.
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câu 2
- I like very to take plane because that remember me the sensation to fly on the earth.
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câu 3
- The weather in France today is cloudy, rainy and very cold.
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- I didn't like it.
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câu 5
- If somebody would like help me to improve my English, I have skype : rosejug. Thank you.
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