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Let me introduce myself
Hi. I am Kim.
I living In-cheon, Korea.
I want to learn English.
Anyone help me plz. I have been to Australia in 2009.
I use English everyday in there.
But I don`t use English now. So I forgot.

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- Hi. I am Kim.
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- I living In-cheon, Korea.
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