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Can you take my breath away?
In the end it's not going to matter how many breaths you took.
Just how many moments took your breath away.
Please correct if there are mistakes. thanks:)

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- Can you take my breath away?
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- In the end it's not going to matter how many breaths you took.
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- Just how many moments took your breath away.
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