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I learn English
Hi!
I want learn English but I am not good, I need practice English because is very important for me.
I from México, and I love eat tacos.
My name is Dayanna and my hobby is practice volleyball.
I have one sister and one brothers, my best friend is Itzel, she is a very small and funny, I love you so much.

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- I learn English
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I want learn English but I am not good, I need practice English because is very important for me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I from México, and I love eat tacos.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- My name is Dayanna and my hobby is practice volleyball.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I have one sister and one brothers, my best friend is Itzel, she is a very small and funny, I love you so much.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5