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Today, i come by my brother.
He does a little party with family for to begin summer.
For this party, my brother will have a barbecue but the weather is bad.
I hope it does not rain.
I hope the summer will be fine and that i could enjoy with my friends.
I would like to do more activities this summer.

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- Today, i come by my brother.
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- He does a little party with family for to begin summer.
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- For this party, my brother will have a barbecue but the weather is bad.
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- I hope it does not rain.
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- I hope the summer will be fine and that i could enjoy with my friends.
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- I would like to do more activities this summer.
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