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Text from Linh_Scorpio - English

  • The feeling when I know my result of the final exam

  • Hello everybody, I'm Linh and I come from Vietnam.
  • I'm 22 years old and now I prepare to graduate the university.
  • I had a final exam at 2 weeks ago and i knew the score of the final exam at 3 days ago.
  • I get two 9 point for two subject (score standar is 10 point), I was suprise and happy when i know my result via my friend.
  • She sent me a message for notice to me, the first i dont beleive about what her say in messenger, so i ask her: "are you kidding me?" - she said: "let you check your result in the website of school"- immediately, i check it...wow, that's is great and i very very happiness when i saw my score...two 9 point..and i range the first in my class..., i think i dreamming, the score is my dream.
  • Suprise and happy are two feelings when i know my result.
  • After that, i notify to my mother and my younger sister, i have a strong jumps every where in my home.. that's the wonderful time, and now when i writting about that with you, i also feel happy and wanna jump again hehehe

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    • She sent me a message for notice to me, the first i dont beleive about what her say in messenger, so i ask her: "are you kidding me?" - she said: "let you check your result in the website of school"- immediately, i check it...wow, that's is great and i very very happiness when i saw my score...two 9 point..and i range the first in my class..., i think i dreamming, the score is my dream.
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    • After that, i notify to my mother and my younger sister, i have a strong jumps every where in my home.. that's the wonderful time, and now when i writting about that with you, i also feel happy and wanna jump again hehehe
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