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  • Hi!
  • Its Silli again) yesterday me with Norsu rode to the Kronshtadt by our motorcycle.
  • I was smiling all the way) When we came there, we found a local beach and just relax there all day.
  • The sun was shining strong and we found the place in the shade.
  • There were three young lady beside us and they was talking all day about very important things like "how to lose weigth" or about their boyfriend.
  • We was listnening them and laughing, cause it was funny.
  • Then we came back home and decided to cook a pizza.
  • While we were cooking the big storm begun.
  • And we were very glad, that we had come home before it started.
  • We were eating pizza and looking the storm.
  • I was smiling again.=)

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