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Today
Today I went to the lake in mountain in my village, titled "Charvin".
There been lot snow and glaces, It was cold but the landscapes was Wonderful !!
I love do trekking alone, it's so amazing

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句子 1
- Today I went to the lake in mountain in my village, titled "Charvin".
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句子 2
- There been lot snow and glaces, It was cold but the landscapes was Wonderful !!
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句子 3
- I love do trekking alone, it's so amazing
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