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Text from Mialee - English

  • a terrible hotel

  • After a tough coach trip, I arrived the destination, which was in the suburbs.
  • As it was 3AM in the morning, I came to a hotel.
  • The receiption was quit ok and with some attractive advertisement pictures of the rooms.
  • However, I totally freaked out when I opened the room's door, because the setting were way beyond the advertisement pictures,offing me antique TV, broken air-condition, even i coudln't open the awful window to renew the gross smell in the room.
  • Apart from all the things mentioned, I found the glass table got some rubbbish and sticked oil on it.
  • All the things were over my tolerance.
  • What really drived me up the wall was no warm water for shower, which was so called 24-hour available.
  • Finally, I packed up and rushed down to the receiption to required for refund.
  • I entirly beliced that they ripped me off because they asked me 30 yuan just because I had opened the room for 10 mins.
  • Visiting that kind o f hotel again would be the last thing I want to do.

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