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My day
Yesterday, I was with my friend and we went to a shop.
We bought a lot of things, that was very fun !
I passed a very good afternoon with her and I hope I would see her again before going to England.

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- My day
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- Yesterday, I was with my friend and we went to a shop.
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- We bought a lot of things, that was very fun !
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- I passed a very good afternoon with her and I hope I would see her again before going to England.
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