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Gym day!
Today I went to the gym! all my body hurt me.
The first days of weight training are terribles!!
But I think I can handle it.
I need to get in shape because next year is my University graduation and I want to look great!
So I have about 6 mount to get is shape and I'm on vacation why not go the gym!

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- Today I went to the gym! all my body hurt me.
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- The first days of weight training are terribles!!
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- But I think I can handle it.
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- I need to get in shape because next year is my University graduation and I want to look great!
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- So I have about 6 mount to get is shape and I'm on vacation why not go the gym!
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