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As you said, I think technology is helping to boost the numbers of the small businesses.
Years ago, the ways to give a message to many people at once, was limited: Radio and TV.
Nowadays, you can do it by Internet, for a fraction of the price.
And inside this new channel of hyper communication, companies could give their messages in many different ways: Video, social networks, press, blogs, etc. I'm trying to make $3mm to boost my dream of change my life, in http://boostyourdream.net, and if Internet didn't exist, there were no chance for me.
I don't imagine myself running back of a journalist covering news, and steal the microphone, and anyways if I do that, I was censured instantly.

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- I want to make a comment, and It need to be correct,help please
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- As you said, I think technology is helping to boost the numbers of the small businesses.
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- Years ago, the ways to give a message to many people at once, was limited: Radio and TV.
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- Nowadays, you can do it by Internet, for a fraction of the price.
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- And inside this new channel of hyper communication, companies could give their messages in many different ways: Video, social networks, press, blogs, etc. I'm trying to make $3mm to boost my dream of change my life, in http://boostyourdream.net, and if Internet didn't exist, there were no chance for me.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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- I don't imagine myself running back of a journalist covering news, and steal the microphone, and anyways if I do that, I was censured instantly.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5