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Hi, English world!
Hi, world.
My name is Lena and I really want to learn English.
I have visited this website in first time today, and I really don't know what to say.
However, I want to say HELLO for everyone..and wish GOOD LUCK for every person here.
Have a nice day! p.s.
Thank you for your comments.

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- Hi, English world!
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- Hi, world.
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- My name is Lena and I really want to learn English.
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- I have visited this website in first time today, and I really don't know what to say.
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- However, I want to say HELLO for everyone..and wish GOOD LUCK for every person here.
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- Have a nice day! p.s.
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- Thank you for your comments.
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