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my hobbies
When I have free time I like watching movie at home or at the cinema.
I love action movies, the sci-fi, fantasy films and horror movies.
I like going to movie premiere when I got tickets.
I left the cinema after the end of the credits because some producer introduce the next film.
When I work I like to listen to music; clasical music to relax when I’m stressed or popular music to motivate me and work faster.
I don’l like concerts, the sounf is poor quality and sometimes I prefer listenning at home.
Moreover, it is too expensive.
I do not have a favorite artist because I like to listen to everything.

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- When I have free time I like watching movie at home or at the cinema.
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- I love action movies, the sci-fi, fantasy films and horror movies.
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- I like going to movie premiere when I got tickets.
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- I left the cinema after the end of the credits because some producer introduce the next film.
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- When I work I like to listen to music; clasical music to relax when I’m stressed or popular music to motivate me and work faster.
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- I don’l like concerts, the sounf is poor quality and sometimes I prefer listenning at home.
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- Moreover, it is too expensive.
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- I do not have a favorite artist because I like to listen to everything.
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