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My introduction message
I want to improve my English thanks to correspondence.
I find that system interesting because talking with a person whose the mother tongue is English will certainly help me to learn the vocabulary and the current phrases.
I've already have English lessons, but not enough to talk in a fluid way and without any mistake.
I love that language, listening to it and talking it.

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- My introduction message
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문장 1
- I want to improve my English thanks to correspondence.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I find that system interesting because talking with a person whose the mother tongue is English will certainly help me to learn the vocabulary and the current phrases.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I've already have English lessons, but not enough to talk in a fluid way and without any mistake.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I love that language, listening to it and talking it.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4