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i'm beginner
Hi!!
My name is Liliya.I'm from Russia/I like sport.
I want to find pen-friends, who will help me to study English=)I go to courses of english one years,but I can't still to talk.

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- i'm beginner
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句子 1
- Hi!!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- My name is Liliya.I'm from Russia/I like sport.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I want to find pen-friends, who will help me to study English=)I go to courses of english one years,but I can't still to talk.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3