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HI EVERYBODY
HI MY NAME IS AMEL.
I WAS BORN IN FRANCE.
I WOULD LIKE TO PRACTICE ENGLISH WITH YOU. THANKS

amelmarseilleJuly 2013赶紧投票吧！
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标题
- HI EVERYBODY
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- HI MY NAME IS AMEL.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I WAS BORN IN FRANCE.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I WOULD LIKE TO PRACTICE ENGLISH WITH YOU. THANKS
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3