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TV and News
It was a great idea to throw away TV!
TV programs often contain not a normal situation of our life making through the opinions of reporters and producers.
Often those situations have only one assessment and I don’t know other facts thus I must think like TV’s producers want.
I can’t estimate news and situations correctly.
I believe the Internet has all things which I’m interested in and in the Internet I can find answer for any question and that information will be more truthful.

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문장 1
- It was a great idea to throw away TV!
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문장 2
- TV programs often contain not a normal situation of our life making through the opinions of reporters and producers.
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문장 3
- Often those situations have only one assessment and I don’t know other facts thus I must think like TV’s producers want.
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- I can’t estimate news and situations correctly.
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- I believe the Internet has all things which I’m interested in and in the Internet I can find answer for any question and that information will be more truthful.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5